Dear Snow White,

My name is JJ .

I like your story but there is some stuff you have problems with . Firstly, why did you run into the woods? You could have run to your grandma's house. Secondly, why would you want to run  into a stranger's house?. Thirdly, why would you let an old lady looking ugly in the house?. What was it like for you to have to be  asleep that long. Were you scary did you have dreams were you afraid? Why would you taste an apple from a old lady a you crazy but I like your story.

By JJ